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Open Poetry #13

How long will I love you?

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

0 posted 2001-05-16 02:02 AM

For one last time,
You've broken my heart.
I let you in,
Right from the start.
I've never felt,
each part of me,
just open up,
we had honesty.
I always thought,
that love returned,
I said in time,
it'll be my turn.
And so now,
I must let it be,
with just my thoughts,
it was only me.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-05-16 07:08 AM

Oh, I feel this strongly. And remember, it was never "only you"..Nice piece.
Sandra

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-05-16 07:26 AM

I know these feelings. makes it kind of hard to trust anyone. Great poem

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-05-16 07:36 AM

Tulip~
Poignant feelings written here.

'I always thought,
that love returned'

It does ... sometimes it comes packaged in a new heart.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

4 posted 2001-05-16 07:38 PM

Thank you for your replies! I've loved this person since the day he entered my life several years ago. We've shared everything, and I always thought he'd "wake up" and realize his feelings for me. Well, he just let me know he's getting married. So it's time for me to let him go, for good this time!

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