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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

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0 posted 2001-05-15 06:58 PM

In answer to Paula Finn's YOUR TITLES IN A POEM
I've tried one too, just to see if I could, hope you don't mind.

Today I will love you
If you could only see
I'm still a lonely man
Am I being heard
Close your eyes
Please stop typing and listen
Sometimes I wish
The sad truth
Sometimes I wish
A world of make-believe
Drops of heaven fall on my head
Life trough rain
Today I will love you

Titia

© Copyright 2001 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved

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1 posted 2001-05-15 07:03 PM

Very good!!

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Irie
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2 posted 2001-05-15 07:03 PM

AWESOME

Oh, now I have to go try it.
Me thinks we should make this a challenge?!?!

~Sheri

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left by those who got there first"

Paula Finn
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3 posted 2001-05-16 01:16 AM

Well done...fun too isnt it?

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-16 11:51 AM

very sincere and real words here

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and the sun drips honey."
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since 2001-03-07

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5 posted 2001-05-16 04:10 PM

This was just great Titia!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

Homepage: http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/451673]

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

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6 posted 2001-05-16 04:14 PM

Wow!! I am so impressed with the ease of these words.

"I am not now that which I have been."

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

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7 posted 2001-05-16 04:31 PM

This is very nice.

walker
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8 posted 2001-05-16 07:39 PM

I love it!

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