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JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

0 posted 2001-05-16 12:06 PM

Street Signs

Danger Ahead
it was the most beautiful cemetary I’d ever seen
where lay my innocence
original intent
the best of me perceived
so rarely it hypnotized with energy
of simple release

Do Not Pass
it was an irresistible challenge to the core of me
an adventure of words
beginnings
the best effortlessly gleaned
where adrenaline flew high above reality
fated to be

Yield
it was as foreign a concept as I’d ever considered
intriguing in its simplicity
due thought
the best challenged by depths of
patient introspection most despised
comes the time

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-05-16 05:44 AM

Great work... Enjoyed reading this one...

regards,
sudhir

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2001-05-16 07:29 AM

JLR- Great poem!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2001-05-16 08:55 AM

enjoyed this!

well done!

~Tier

confetti
Junior Member

since 2001-04-12

Posts 33

4 posted 2001-05-16 11:27 PM

I was expecting something else but this is interesting.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-05-17 12:04 PM

Fascinating JLR. I'm intrigued by the direction you took with the signs. Words can mean so many different things, you've extracted much power from them.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2001-05-17 01:56 AM

JLR.........you are in a fork in the road of your life......and not every turn is a dead end.....start trusting yourself.....you KNOW the way to go.......now get there......helen

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

7 posted 2001-05-17 04:51 AM

i am only left wondering what you would have done with "Wrong Way" or maybe "Stop" ...... good work!

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ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

8 posted 2001-05-17 02:31 PM

R.J.

Hey woman! Great work. I enjoyed this one.

ttys
Laura

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

9 posted 2001-05-17 02:41 PM

Stop... an irresistible challenge to fly on!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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