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Open Poetry #13
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monique
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
0 posted 2001-05-15 07:49 PM

Let the brilliant stars turn on
Me so you can see my eyes
Be on you searching for
Your smile as you admire the
Shelter I built for us
From the money I won at
The casino in Biloxi where a
Storm was so bad even
The electricity went out
Light a match
Whithin minutes
Your hands
Dark and soft
Touch my flank
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Denise
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1 posted 2001-05-15 10:06 PM

Very nice, Monique! Challenge well met, I'd say!
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-05-15 10:11 PM

I think I shall have to visit the cliche' challenge...

there are some here I haven't met, yet...
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