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just the distance from my hand to my eye
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just the distance from my hand to my eye |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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i have tall trees in my eyes you know, but the leaves keep slapping my hands the dirt is my best friend you know, and it's staind blood red the ocean is the bluest, the sky is just it's kin i know this isn't that great, but here it is just a sloppy pouty thought to a dear friend Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids i live hawaii, and the dirt will stain any thing it's so rich and burnt orange, and the ocean and trees are all that's here it in this poem i mean [This message has been edited by redheart angrybraids (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
A deep beyond all color, Beyond all sounding too, The ocean's true alluring, For want of better..... Blue. Hello, redheart angrybraids. Please, share more about Hawaii. Bob |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh I love reading you. Loved every single line. Maree  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RedHeartAngryBraids~ You are just so cute !  This is refreshingly YOU ! Go ahead ... pout for us ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Like it very much. Titia |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
redheart, glad to see you back again so soon! Give me hope you might be our irregular regular, again, yes? As always, love the spiritual quality of your words...they ARE engrams, or thought-prints, with a native american mystical quality that is just charming! More please? (psssst...and e me, tell me what it's like living in paradize?) |
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