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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-05-15 10:31 AM


Take my heart and do with it whatever it takes,
to make this love work.
Don't walk away.
Let's face ourselves.
Revealing feelings that still remain.
Let's be cautious,
for we can slip.
Only fo each other live.
This neverending agony,
must take a turn for the best.
Sometimes there's a rainbow after the rain.
Let's avoid a place where love has no name.



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1 posted 2001-05-15 10:37 AM


I would like to avoid that place also Walker.....I can relate to this one.  Well written.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Sven
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2 posted 2001-05-15 05:40 PM


sometimes though, you can't really keep away. . .

well written walker. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
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3 posted 2001-05-15 05:45 PM


As gold mixes with silver - we will not walk alone.

From the heart - sincerity. Where you go I follow.

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
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4 posted 2001-05-15 09:24 PM


I read this and rethought my earlier comments...a love like this should be given chances until their are none left to give.  Beautifully written, walker!
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