Open Poetry #13 |
A Time for Us |
Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
A Time for Us Silently waiting among Orion's arm Pleiades whispers of cloaked desires Giant Betelgeuse guards celestial karma Waxen wings flutter with heart songs Polaris listens to songs from Spica Pleiades sends warming melodies The deep night melts with want Wings dissolve in heated rapture Celestial clock ticks toward infinity Polaris waits for Pleiades tonight The night stretches beyond millenium Tomorrow's symphony sings, a time for us. James Parker Haley (c)2000 *Note* Orion Pleiades Polaris and Speca are all stars or star groups connected in some magical way. Giant Betelgeuse is a very large Orange Sun thousands of times larger then Our Sun. [This message has been edited by Parker (edited 05-14-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I do like the fact that you believe magic is the connecting link... well done, Parker... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Tomorrow's symphony sings, a time for us." Precious to think about, thanks for the thoughts....lovely write Parker~ Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Well done Parker, well done. This is very magical. I like how you explain the stars' conections. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Parker~ hey handsome romantic .....this felt so romantic to me......under the stars at night.....mmmmm I like this very much..... SEA |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Lady, magic is always the connecting link isn't it. Lauren, the sky is so warming to this poet and dreamer...thanks for replying. PoeticKnight, thank you. SEA, under the stars with you. hmmmm sounds nice. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
My dear, you have stars in your eyes! Lovely. Cor |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cant wait to hear tomorrows symphony singing... this poem makes me feel like i'm flying among the stars... hugs, g "...if i ran away, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very beautiful melodies I hear in this Parker.....well done. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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