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Parker
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0 posted 2001-05-14 04:27 PM


A Time for Us

Silently waiting among Orion's arm
Pleiades whispers of cloaked desires
Giant Betelgeuse guards celestial karma
Waxen wings flutter with heart songs

Polaris listens to songs from Spica
Pleiades sends warming melodies
The deep night melts with want
Wings dissolve in heated rapture

Celestial clock ticks toward infinity
Polaris waits for Pleiades tonight
The night stretches beyond millenium
Tomorrow's symphony sings, a time for us.

James Parker Haley (c)2000

*Note*
Orion
Pleiades
Polaris
and
Speca
are all stars or star groups connected in some
magical way.  

Giant Betelgeuse is a very large Orange Sun thousands of times larger then Our Sun.  

[This message has been edited by Parker (edited 05-14-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 James Haley - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-05-14 04:35 PM


I do like the fact that you believe magic is the connecting link...

well done, Parker...

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2 posted 2001-05-14 05:59 PM


Tomorrow's symphony sings, a time for us."


Precious to think about, thanks for the thoughts....lovely write Parker~
Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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3 posted 2001-05-14 06:02 PM


Well done Parker, well done. This is very magical. I like how you explain the stars' conections.
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4 posted 2001-05-14 06:34 PM


Parker~   hey handsome  romantic .....this felt so romantic to me......under the stars at night.....mmmmm I like this very much.....   SEA
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5 posted 2001-05-14 07:34 PM


Lady, magic is always the connecting link isn't it.  

Lauren, the sky is so warming to this poet and dreamer...thanks for replying.  

PoeticKnight, thank you.  

SEA, under the stars with you. hmmmm sounds nice.  

Parker

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6 posted 2001-05-14 07:40 PM


My dear, you have stars in your eyes!

Lovely.

Cor

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7 posted 2001-05-15 12:46 PM


cant wait to hear tomorrows symphony singing...  

this poem makes me feel like i'm flying among the stars...  

hugs, g

"...if i ran away,
i'd never have the strength
to go very far..."  

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8 posted 2001-05-15 07:11 PM


enjoy
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9 posted 2001-05-15 08:57 PM


Very beautiful melodies I hear in this Parker.....well done.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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