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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-05-15 10:19 AM


I feel as though I'm being punished
for what, I do not know,
but this feeling has been with me
since you said that "I must go."
It hurts here in my heart
not knowing your reasons why,
but a smile I wear on my face
although inside my heart does cry.

I know your hurting inside
and it's best that you went away,
but every breath I draw inside of me
whispers, please come back to stay.
I know that I'm being selfish;
that this is something you must do,
but how do I teach my heart
not to still be in love with you?


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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inot2B
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1 posted 2001-05-15 10:54 AM


Years spent teaching the heart to trust and love, then someone tells you it's now time to turn it off. I'm sorry!!!!
Oh so sad!!

RMW
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2 posted 2001-05-15 12:42 PM


Your last two lines, indeed, that is the question. Thank you.  Bob
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3 posted 2001-05-15 01:43 PM


How indeed?  Such a sad piece, Gentle Spirit.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-05-15 02:24 PM


but every breath I draw inside of me
whispers, please come back to stay.
=============================
felt every  word of this GS,
an emotional,honest poetic declaration of the heart...
much emoted in a few perfectly chosen words.
sad but beautiful.
take care
jm

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2001-05-15 08:37 PM


Hugs to all, and thank you much.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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6 posted 2001-05-15 09:21 PM


D~

Sometimes it is the heart that teaches us....remain strong, it will work out, and if not it wasn't meant to be....


Lauren~


****

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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7 posted 2001-05-15 11:05 PM


oh my.....this touches my heart so completely.....you're gonna make me cry......
Panne447
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8 posted 2001-05-16 12:23 PM


GS, Great end lines- they say it all. Panne
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9 posted 2001-05-16 07:10 AM


Oh, you know this is the hardest thing to do, to teach your heart to stop loving someone. If you get the answer, please let me know. Its been 7 months for me, and my heart feels exactly the same. Very sweet and well done write.
Take care.
Sandra

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2001-05-16 12:39 PM


Thanks to you all and hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

sigheyes
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11 posted 2001-05-16 07:11 PM


D, this tugs the heart strings......gentle, caring write.
Lone Wolf
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12 posted 2001-05-16 09:17 PM


Hang in there, GS.  It does get better with time and a little soul searching.  May you find the peace that you seek one day very soon.  Nice write.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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13 posted 2001-05-16 09:44 PM


Gentle Spirit,

     This is the poem I wanted to write about 2 months ago..lol.  You did beautifully .

TaraB

jwesley
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14 posted 2001-05-16 10:13 PM


You find out...you let all of us know, my friend...let the ages know.

Good write.

jwesley

Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 2001-05-17 10:05 AM


Thanks all and hugs.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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16 posted 2001-05-18 06:43 PM


This is such a hard situation, GS...but you've shared it with us wonderfully...

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Cuddlez
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17 posted 2001-05-18 06:53 PM


I have no need to be in your shoes
Nor do I desire your pain
But much luck to you
And much wisdom you now stand to gain
*g*

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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18 posted 2004-06-01 12:37 PM


yes...sigh

I know this

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