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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-05-15 09:56 AM

healing

in shadows

'neath quilt and
sheets

your thoughts
guided hands

touching ~

lingering ~

your words
whispered over
wounds

and
joy

came

ecstasy
cried

you...
smiled

and whispered
again

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2001-05-15 10:15 AM

Ohhhh, Very clever, that's an intelligent poem .
I enjoyed reading it .
Many Thanks .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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Try not, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-05-15 10:23 AM

Enjoyed this one lady, so well put together. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

GrapesRMine
Junior Member

since 2001-05-13

Posts 13

3 posted 2001-05-15 10:38 AM

I read this one over and over to soak in the full measure of the feeling. Lovely and very well constructed. Thank you.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

4 posted 2001-05-15 12:16 PM

Thank you all, and Grapes? Welcome to Passions!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-05-16 01:08 AM

ooooooo, I just loved this one!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

Homepage: http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/451673]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-05-17 04:15 PM

I whispered again
while my mind cried out to you
oh, please, never stop

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-05-17 04:16 PM

what did he whisper?????

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2001-05-17 04:24 PM

I liked this one a lot. Excellent writing.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

sea_of_okc
Senior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

9 posted 2001-05-17 04:39 PM

Wonerful poem lady.
Bring your ear close, I feel a need to whisper

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

10 posted 2001-05-17 07:05 PM

Very nicely written, LIW! I really enjoyed this...great style!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

11 posted 2001-05-18 10:50 AM

Thank you all so much for reading, and feeling, this healing....

joycerogers
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 83
Texas

12 posted 2001-05-18 12:14 PM

Now this is just too pretty.
Very well written.

O Morning...wrap yourself around me today. Let me experience the peace I see in you.

Joyce Rogers

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