Open Poetry #13 |
Dare We Dream |
A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
You could extend your hand to mine and know that in my heart, I have placed a love for you beyond the reach of isolation’s grasp dare we envision a covenant without fear or disquiet of familiar abandon if only we were to hold true to our hearts without concern, we could revel in reality, the dream we have the courage…only to speak of. Annie Lehberg achildsheart 05-14-01 May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Indeed, hold true to your heart.... |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Annie, I really enjoyed your posting. I had to read it several times to discover the flow of the piece. Indeed, if only we all possessed the courage to revel in reality. You might consider modifying the line structure or punctuation, for clarity. Well done! INclan |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
always, we must be true to our hearts. Well done. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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GrapesRMine Junior Member
since 2001-05-13
Posts 13 |
I love this line in particular: "...I have placed a love for you beyond the reach of isolation’s grasp" Few people have the courage to speak of dreams or reality, but you speak of "both and." Thank you for this. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
we do. . . and this poem lets us. . . wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Your words reach out, as a candle whose flame longs for gentle eyes to linger in its sway. Coal [This message has been edited by Coal Surrender (edited 05-16-2001).] |
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