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The Gypsy and the Sheik
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The Gypsy and the Sheik |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Gypsy eyes of emerald green, stare deep into the fire... Magic flickers dance while gypsy summons all desire... Reaching down into her soul, a simple spell is found... Then cast upon the spirit wind, to seek his eyes of brown... Never meeting...touching not, a distant seed was sown... Taking roots, though miles apart, the seed of love has grown... Gypsy heart has fallen for the Sheik, of desert winds... While deep inside his rugged chest, a love for her begins... Forces far beyond their mortal hearts have come to play... mixing ancient magic with the tools, of modern day... A simple click has crossed the miles, and opened up the gate... And neither Gypsy, nor her Sheik, have strength to make love wait... Freely taking, giving more, they join in lover’s dance... Knowing that it all depends on magic lines, and chance... Passion grows with every step they take, and every turn... And in the souls where flickered love, a raging fire now burns... Time will tell, if Gypsy love will keep her handsome Sheik... His magic equals that of hers, and wraps her as we speak... In golden thoughts of desert nights, upon the burning sands... Two hearts entwined, held gently.... as tomorrow takes their hands... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I loved this one. I have ancestors from Spain and I always wonder if there is some gypsy blood in me  I expect a sequel on this one  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sunnyone~ How fantastic of you to present this write....I agree with walker more please....wonderful from your pen my friend...always~  Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-14-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Walker... Yes, as one of gypsy blood myself (from the celtic line), I do believe that there is gypsy in your blood, as I can tell it is in your soul from your beautiful, musical writings!! Thank you, my friend..... Hi Lauren... And I thank you also, and so glad you enjoyed. I will confess to you both that there will be more sequels as the story unfolds, but for now, only time holds the chapters!! Good to see you here!!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Arise and join the caravan, the sun awaits the journey's begining... I love gyspy stories myself... There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, Jamie, my friend...... you do have all of the gypsy magic in your writing.........possibly you are of the same spirit? I think so!! Thank you!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny I can see it now - sexy red dress with those come hither green eyes. WOW. Great job - you certainly have a knack for writing exciting poetry. Thank you for sharing. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Ariana... I believe life should always have excitement gilding the edges......gypsies tend to make excitement where none has been before!!  Yes, red dress.....red is my very favorite of colors!!!!!!!!!! Thanks!!Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wish I was a Sheik...sounds like fun...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello James.... With the talent that I have seen and enjoyed in your writing, I do believe that you are a Sheik already!!! Your words can make you anything that you desire to be!! Thank you for coming by...... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, I love this, what a great depiction of a new and wondrous relationship. May the gypsy and the sheik reign together, as they should. Sandra |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Magical from beginning to conclusion, I love the closing stanza! Coal |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This had a lovely sing-song to it....and I'll bet you've put it to music, too! |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
I saw them riding off into the desert sunset. Wonderfully romantic in a millenium sort of way....techmance maybe. I truly enjoyed....  Live like it's your last day... Dance like nobody's watching... Love like you've never been hurt... [This message has been edited by bbent (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
hi Sandra... and well they might, even as an unlikely combination....their magic transcends their locales!! thank you, lil sis! hi Coal Surrender... ah, yes......the ending is without an ending as it has not concluded yet!!! Thank you!!! hi Sunshine... The music is of nature herself, the gypsy fire, the desert winds, and the beating of new love in joined hearts....thank you!!! hi Bbent... and 'techmance' it is!! Wonderful ideas are conjured up with the coining of that word!!! Thank you, and I am so glad that you enjoyed this one!!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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