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Auguste
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0 posted 2001-05-14 04:03 PM


Remember Me

by Michael


When flesh shall pass
and footprints are no more
upon the sandy ocean shores,
remember me.  

Box the poems and store the art,
for I was more than these.  

Your comforter,
your closest friend,
I taught you how to dream.  

I closely held you as you wept
and calmed your fears.  

Through me,
you learned that life’s
a precious gift
and hope prevails.  

When nights are laced
in heavenly display,
remember lessons that I taught.  

All feelings,
no matter what they are,
have value.  

Everyone
is deserving of respect.  

There is no color
to the human race,
we’re all the same.  

I lit your candle with my own
and smiled as I watched you glow.  
Always share your light with others
and bring joy to their lives.  

Know that fear once conquered,
is courage grown.

Remember me,
your father.
and how I loved you so.    
  

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

© Copyright 2001 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-14 04:09 PM


These are the most valuable life lessons a Father could leave a child, and you certainly will have taught a child well!  This was fantastic Michael, and so heartwarming.

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

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2 posted 2001-05-14 04:11 PM


You are most certainly speaking to those who are not only your children, but have become your friends through your gifts of poetry and art...

well said,

and 'twill be well remembered....

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3 posted 2001-05-14 06:00 PM


Priceless!!  


Lauren~
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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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4 posted 2001-05-14 06:20 PM


I do remember. . . and always will. . .

thank you Michael. . . this is superb. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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5 posted 2001-05-14 08:13 PM


What a wonderful piece this is.. your child is lucky to have you for a father..

Elizabeth Anne

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6 posted 2001-05-15 01:53 PM


Mysteria,
I appreciate your kind comments and am happy that you like this one.

Lady In White,
If my friends also find something in this that is of benefit to them, then all the better.  Thank you for the nice words.

Lauren,
Thank you for the "pricless" and for reading, my friend.

Sven,
Your comments are always so kind and much appreciated.  Thank you.

Elizabeth Anne,
He's a wonderful child...very wonderful and I am much blessed.  Thank you.


Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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8 posted 2005-02-14 09:59 PM


Thinking of you, Chris....and praying for you!!  
Found this poem that your dad wrote for you...and thought...maybe...you would need a gentle "hug" from him [for I consider his poems and words hugs].  I am SURE that he is watching over you...as he told me that he would.  NEVER stop believing that your dad loved you and even now...he misses you!  When he and I would speak...he would talk about you...with smiles and laughter in his voice!  [Oh, how I loved to hear him talk about you...your dad was some thing special.  Not all dad's talk about their kids the way he did you. ]  You were his one true treasure...his love...and his life!  Never stop believing that!
Well, I just wanted you to know that I was thinking about you.  And that you will have my prayers ALWAYS!!!

God bless you now and FOREVER, Chris!!  

With love and hugs...Becka  

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