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Open Poetry #13

Just A Glimpse

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

0 posted 2001-05-14 12:28 PM

I was at the dance
With my best friend
And then a song came on

I turned around
Blindly looking for you
Even though you weren't there

Silly girl
He's with another
Its over

But I can't help
Thinking
Of him

And wondering
Why 'its over'
When I still search

For just a glimpse
OF HIM

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2001-05-14 12:33 PM

Wow, this really does deserve cuddles, I hope they help you, I know what it's like to keep looking even when they wont look back .
Fantastic job, I really did enjoy reading it .
Many thanks .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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Try not, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

2 posted 2001-05-14 06:39 PM

Thank you:-)

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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