Open Poetry #13 |
Given in Love/Given in Thanks |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*Gallery Special Exhibit* For Mother's Day: For my Mother, Corina Happy Mother's Day to all Mothers out there today Mom, is a day set aside for you it's a day when you usually get flowers and candy and jewelry but today Mom, I have a gift to give that's just the right size, color, and shape and best of all, you won't have to return it here it is you'll forgive me a little if the container is a bit torn and if the edges are a bit beat I've been holding on to it for a while it's actually a gift you gave to me thirty-three years ago it's my life and I know that it probably doesn't look like you thought that it would when you gave it to me I've tried to take care of it the best that I could and yes, I made mistakes but you forgave me for them and I learned from them thanks to you so here Mom, today, I return the gift of my life back to you a gift that you gave me in love and a gift I now give to you in thanks -------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Well you took the words right out of my mouth. I couldn't have said it better on this day. In my journal library this will stay. LP For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Blinking back tears. This is beautiful. Completely. My compliments, Sven. "I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have done a good thing Sven...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ A lovely poem, with words of Grace for mothers....for your mom....wonderful mu friend... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful, I hope my kids write a poem like this one day. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Well, no words need to be added, it's marvellous. Titia |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And what finer gift can a Mother receive? Beautiful Sven, this Mum would be honoured to receive such a beautiful poem and/or gift... Isis *Enlightenment is within all things* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Sven.....this poem is tender & sweet as always.........helen |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Beautiful piece of work Sven. This is something for her to be proud of... says something about her too, like the kind of son she's raised and the great job she has done! ~Sheri |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, this is truly BEAUTIFUL! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
There's always so much heart in your writings, Sven, I'm sure your mother is a very proud woman! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a wonderful gift Sven. Well done. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yes...words from the heart is the best gift a person can give to another and this poem showed that beauty even more i hope you and your mother had a wonderful mothers day together...thanks for the read...sven [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-14-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are a pretty special guy |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Your mother sounds wonderful, and no less her son. Lucky pair. Joyce |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you everyone. . . your words mean a lot to me. . . I'm glad that you liked this one. . . I haven't shared it with my Mother yet, but I will very soon. . . Thank you again. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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