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On A Quest To Believing
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On A Quest To Believing |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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On A Quest To Believing Something tells me you've vanished like dust in the wind So, I've been trying to hold faith by it's hands I'm hoping reality never takes a great hold on me For truth just stares at me from where I stand... I'm on a journey to remember how it feels to fly Because one fine night I owned the skies I have to remember when life meant just me and you I'm on a quest to believing you miss me, too... I just have to believe I still soar in your heart I just have to be somewhere other than gone So, I'm searching, I am, for nighttime's face And, I hope I've touched your heart all along... I'm on a quest to believing you still sleep with me That every neon moon it's my heart you see I can't be forgotten when the rainbows stretch far and wide I must believe I'm still found there behind your eyes... Oh, every now and then I run at least a hundred miles So easily in a moment I relive those years I must believe you hold the stars with both of us in mind Because a little life falls with every tear... I'm on a quest to believe, I just have to believe That I'm not alone beneath this cold lonesome rain For I cannot live with even the smallest chance That your heart just may not feel the same... Saun Sauni :) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ This is emotively heartfelt ~ 'I'm on a quest to believe, I just have to believe' I pray your quest takes you where you want it to ... and if not ... that you find serenity waiting. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Such a soft and gentle voice heard throughout your poem, Saunni, beatifully written... *hugs* ~Tier |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Sooo Poetic - I've been on that journey before - wishing you the best on yours. Good luck. For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
All I can say is that I relate to this more than you could know...damn good write! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Thank you all for replying. It means a lot.  Sauni Sauni :) |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
As I read this I could imagine this person sitting under the stars and whispering this poem to the stars.. Lovely *sighs* -------------- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and I could imagine it being heard by one that loves this person. . . love it Saun. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Thank you both for responding. It meansa lot to me. Thanks! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i can see every image so clearly for you paint with your words flowing from your magnificent pen and your poetic heart so well |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh I felt this one deep |
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