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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-05-13 05:24 PM



Whispering Echoes

When all alone with poetic thoughts
As echoes whisper to me,
I'm haunted by the want of you
In my silent moment sea.

Each evening, as I float you in
You touch my loneliness,
And enter in my heart through eyes
That softly view, caress.

Tormenting me with passions deep
Of silent hungerings.
The air fills empty, with romance
From echoes whispering....

You reign me tight, enclosed in mist
Pressure felt, I'm echo kissed.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
1 posted 2001-05-13 05:32 PM


Lovely poem, well done!
A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale
2 posted 2001-05-13 05:36 PM


so, so pretty..

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2001-05-13 08:12 PM


Hi Wynter,

Wow awesome, what a wonderful poem dear friend, very very much loved this one,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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