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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-05-12 09:40 PM

I know you're here,
Reading this
Feasting your eyes on what you think is my fear.
But listen
Do you hear the sound of echos?
Where you beat a path with quick feet,
To the door
When love arose for its feast?
Oh faithful coward,
Be true to your steps,
And miss not even one,
For then will you have the power,
To run a thousand more lifetimes,
From the door where love gets twisted.
Have this for your ears then..
I'll not be your word goddess,
Brimming with elation for your touch.
No longer, sir.
No longer!
I'll soon be away,
And you'll be left.
No longer can I be another,
For even now your so called love,
Knows not of us.
And if she does,
Then you'll do well not to upset my rage,
By telling me you've given away our secret.
For I am ever linking to your truest desires,
And as you know me,
I now know you.

Meadow Nymph
New Member

since 2001-05-12

Posts 4
Phantasm Isle

1 posted 2001-05-12 11:05 PM

Wow, I am very impressed! Such depth to your words, I am so very glad I have gotten the chance to read.

~Just be...and believe~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2001-05-13 01:01 AM

WOW I am looking for part two.....you speak your mind with truth, I so admire that...

this was wonderful temptress.....be well...

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-05-13 01:49 PM

wow. . . there's a lot of power and anger in this. . .

well written. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2001-05-13 07:45 PM

Wow...this definitely said it all...fanastic expression of how you're feeling about the situation! Great work, Temptress!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-13 07:50 PM

they say we never truly know someone....this is wonderful, Jenn........

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

6 posted 2001-05-13 08:12 PM

Powerful indeed! You go girl!
This is fantastic work and expression of your feelings.
Made me feel like I was empowered after reading it.
I think this one needs to go into my library.

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

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