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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea 
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She by Michael She is the light on morning dew when daybreak sounds are heard. The wishes on a birthday cake and silence of a bird. She is the drying leaves of fall, and colors they display. The salty, copper scent of love when passions are at play. The breath when candles lose their light and glow they once posessed. She is the movement in a dream massaging souls to rest. Proust- |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The imagery in this poem is perfect, Michael...so beautifully written....makes me sigh. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I loved your last two lines... for that is the way I feel right now. Peace~~LP thank you for a wonderful poem. LP For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Oh that's beautiful, Michael. Quite magical and mystical. I applaud!  "I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one." |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Michael~ What a fantastic write from you.....you have complimented two beautiful worlds, nature and a women....excellent...  Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
She is special! Lovely. |
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elizabeth anne Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 83 |
Very lovely Michael.. as usual! Elizabeth Anne |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful and flowing Michael! Beautiful imagery and phrasing in this exceptional piece, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Martie, Coming from the Queen of Imagery, that is quite a compliment. Thank you, my friend. LP, I'm glad you liked the last two lines and much appreciate you reading this. Thank you. Just A Woman, Thank you for the applause and for liking this piece. Lauren, An "excellent." So cool! Thank you, my friend. walker, Yes, she is quite special. Thank you. Elizabeth Anne, It's always good to see you post on my work. Thank you for your kind comments, my friend. Kit, Thank you for the "exceptional piece" and am very happy that you enjoyed. Michael Proust- |
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