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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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0 posted 2001-05-13 07:22 AM


Yours

This new dream?

from the sun streaked
scarlet-yellow rays
cast down by dawn?

‘Tis yours.

‘Tis a gift.

Open with imagination…

enjoy with the heart.


© Copyright 2001 Decaflame - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-05-13 10:53 AM


tis a lovely gift...
tis a lovely gem of pen here as well.
succinct and sincere
well done DeccaFlame  

Did you make it to the Milky Way,
see the lights faded
that heaven is overrated
Did you fall for a shooting star
One without a permanent scar

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-05-13 11:16 AM


It is always a joy to receive such a special gift.  Cherish it forever.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

3 posted 2001-05-13 01:27 PM


A keeper in my book. Was that a John Lennon song- "Imagine"

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
4 posted 2001-05-13 07:42 PM


Well, all I can say to this, other than it is a fantastic write, is that it has spoken volumes to me today...thank you for sharing this...

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Balladeer
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5 posted 2001-05-13 08:16 PM


open with imagination....a very key step. Nicely done...
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
6 posted 2001-05-13 09:20 PM


Wow!

Enjoyed reading!

~Tier

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
7 posted 2001-05-13 09:36 PM


Wow, I really loved this! You have a lot of talent!  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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