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0 posted 2001-05-12 11:03 PM


Cats Traipse My Life, Too

Somewhere, he’s
around 68 or 69

his voice
raspier now, I would
imagine

his cat’s cat’s cats
still haunt
his mind,
own his home,
as in leonine
tread,

they still bring thoughts
of yesterday’s
conquests back to him

no matter who lives
there now…

tawny coats bringing
liquid movement
of moments long gone,

black fur wraps
with green eyes winking,
blinking back
memories of mornings
between thighs
he thought he would
never forget
what’s her name

calicos and coffee
newspapers shuffled
tousled heads ‘neath sheets
feet searching
for a quiet piece of
cool in the sheet’s corners

yes, she and she and she
did that

and other things

his craggy face of then
craggier still but
sexy, yes, still that
look of “come read my
mind”

what would I give
for one day

of Rod reading aloud and
me, asking questions
as they came to
mind,

or not,

just listening

listening

why cats leave
their pawprints throughout
his writings,

but it’s simple…

feline women left
their prints
everywhere…

he must be a Leo….

but I don’t know.

I only hope I have
nine lives to
find out.

12 May 01


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-12 11:54 PM


Now...you must be bored, when you spend all that time analyzing those cats!  I know from experience cats just are! But...I am curious if you had nine lives what or who would you be?  This was very cute I liked it.
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2 posted 2001-05-13 02:25 AM


Much said in an allusion
of real drapery the cat
is to blame and to praise
are they not all
so inclined and equally delightful


Comliments

AT


"The most redeeming facet of life is that we have the comfort of knowing it will end. Death doth love equally."

[This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 05-13-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-05-13 06:28 AM


Kari dear heart, I love it you just knew I would. Utterly truly wonderful, and yes I can see you sitting there with me discussing cats.
Fabulous dear heart truly awesome.
            
          
Take care love and warm stuff
               Puck
                

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-05-13 07:10 AM


Love it very much, I've always have cats, sometimes ten at the same time, and yes one could fill a day speaking of cats.

Titia


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5 posted 2001-05-13 08:08 AM


I guess this all stems from going back after a couple of decades to read McKuen's works...

when I first read him, the innocent that I was, I recall blushing at certain passages...

as I read him today, he always had a cat passing by in the wings....

and at times, I still blush...

but with a smile!

Glad you all enjoyed...

Mysteria, I can only hope if I had nine lives, that I would improve on each one, but who would I come back as? That cannot be a given, as that "identity" is most likely unknown, as it should be. But definitely, any faults I have, I would like wiped away...

ATelemon...having you back is like a breath of fresh air!  I have missed your comments, and your poetry...

Marsha, someday, we shall surely discuss cats, and other things that come with tea...

Titia [what a lovely name] I have had cats, and now I am only owned by a lovely dog... but someday I will have cats again...

thank you all for reading...

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