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Far Above the Clouds...
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Far Above the Clouds... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 far above the clouds, the words I want to say to you hide from me.... down here, afloat the dynamic waves of the sea, expression eludes me in such a desperate fashion... well below the mist, sighs illicitly escape the confines of my secret thoughts... up above, flying along with my concentration, my ability to gather any other thoughts stays out of my reach... between the defining shapes of the haze, the nonexistence of loneliness continues to inundate me... right before my eyes, the purpose to my life comes into view through your eyes... -kh 05/06/01 *thanks, JM for the pic and the "challenge"...  to be with you... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ Just LOVELY ! The poem soars ... the graphic rocks ! Way cool is that inspiring chick - JanetMarie ! Ya' done good ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
down here, afloat the dynamic waves of the sea, expression eludes me in such a desperate fashion... well below the mist, sighs illicitly escape the confines of my secret thoughts... up above, flying along with my concentration, my ability to gather any other thoughts stays out of my reach... =========================== Ahhh my friend..ya spoil me  and your welcome...and thank you I knew you could do this one justice... its such a cool pic... gotta love that webshots  love the vocab and phrasing in this one, Soooo... If I send ya a pic a week?? ooops....sorry....confused me with the teach  well done poetess of the snow  you speak to me in riddles |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, I loved the picture and the poem....brilliant presentation!! Nathan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: I love this line. . . and this poem. . . excellent sp. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And a wonderful view it is, too Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Marge: thank you so much! glad you liked this...yes, JM is very 'cool'...  JM: hey you...that was a great pic to work with...thank you again...a pic a week, eh?? just make sure the Teach doesn't have any "assignments" for me...  ...but, that would be fun, cuz sometimes it takes a butt kickin' to get me moving sometimes, and the graphics that you find are amazing, so, bring it on, m'friend...thanks for your wonderful compliments, too...glad you approve!! Nate: thank you! I am happy you liked this!!  Sven: thanks...that's one of my fave lines, too...glad you liked it! Interloper: indeed it is...thanks so much! sp to be with you... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wow and thank you!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Cool! So cool! The title I just love and the picture also. Such a great write! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I applaud, especially your ending! Wonderful. I love your latest work. "I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one." |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Kathleen: why thanks! I'm happy you liked it! Saunni: thank you so much! I didn't expect to see this again! I appreciate your kind reply! JAW: I am flattered by your applause...it's wonderful to know how much other poets enjoy my work! thanks so much! sp to be with you... |
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