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Meadow Nymph
New Member

since 2001-05-12

Posts 4
Phantasm Isle

0 posted 2001-05-12 11:02 PM

Earthen deities
Predetermined to be of divinity
Standing illustrious--recognized
To shine enswathed in brilliancy,
To become preeminent
In the quest for a common ground.
Crumbling, old stone walls
And the ruining of tranquillity
Hold no power over those
Who push beyond the poverty
And injustice of the world
To observe the perpetual beauty
Present within us all.

~Just be...and believe~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-05-12 11:05 PM

A beautiful entrance to Passions! Welcome, and will be honored to read more!

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

2 posted 2001-05-12 11:09 PM

wonderfully written, enjoyed muchly.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

3 posted 2001-05-12 11:28 PM

~~Thank You and Amen!!!!!!! Let's hear more from you. It certainly got quiet in here. Well move over - let me join this party!LP

For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2001-05-12 11:51 PM

This is just wonderful (though I'd like a darker font color!). Welcome to our family, I too look forward to reading more from you.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-05-13 12:44 PM

MeadowNymph~
Welcome to Passions !

And a thoughtful entrance you've made~

'To observe the perpetual beauty
Present within us all.'

Enjoyed this thought.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2001-05-13 01:13 AM

Welcom. Lovely first poem. Joyce

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-05-13 01:22 AM

Wonderful entrance you've made...
excellent vocabulary choices and poetic phrases.
Your writing is very familiar...
Welcome to poetry land.
I look forward to more from your gifted pen

Did you make it to the Milky Way,
see the lights faded
that heaven is overrated
Did you fall for a shooting star
One without a permanent scar

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