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It's Like. . . (re-write/re-post from Open #6)
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It's Like. . . (re-write/re-post from Open #6) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Every I love you Is like the petal of a flower Caressing the skin on my cheek Soft and warm Fragrant and colorful Lingering on my mind And wafting through my head Every smile Is like an unspoken bond Between friends and lovers Quiet and delicate Strong and knowing Showing in my eyes And staying in my heart Every loving touch Is like a kiss between us Fingers tracing here and there Gentle and yielding Comforting and loving Leaving prints on my skin And traces on my soul ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
So delicate, so very fantastic... great work, my friend... Regards O Sir Sven, Sudhir |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sven...."unspoken bonds"....are very important. Nicely said. Bob |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Yes, love should be cherished. You've expressed this just beautifully. I compliment you!  "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very nice-- lots can be said with a simple smile-- Jamie |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Every word that you write brings peace to my heart. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sven, this is quite lovely, right from the heart! Corinne |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Prints on your skin and traces on your soul...you are the king of swoon sven. but then again, i already told you that. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This must be re-post month! No one told me. This is sensational, very romantic and very moving. Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sudhir, thank you my friend. . . Bob, yes they are. . . they go a long way. . . thank you. . . Just a Woman, I will always cherish love. . . thank you for the compliment. . . Jamie, and with a glance. . . especially into the right kind of eyes. . . thank you. . . inot2B, thank you my friend. . . I am glad that I can bring you peace. . . your words mean a lot to me. . . vandana, thank you!!! Corinne, thank you. . . glad that you liked. . . PK, I thought that I was the King of Romance??  LOL. . . thanks for telling me again though. . . Kathleen, no one told me either. . . but, I'm taking it as a cue to revise some of my older stuff, make it better. . . thank you my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ahh..what a good thing I decided to come on line tonight. This belongs back on the top. Beautiful heart hugs from your pen.  In the worst of times, let me drift beneath the cloak of Oblivion. I favor the night as it favors me. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
if ever a long song is written this is it..oh wow Sven, this goes right to my personal library....thank you for this one....  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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