Open Poetry #13 |
Pen the Word |
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Pen the Word by Michael Twilight lingers 'pon his graying brow, as nesting birds find rest with coming chill of eve. A sack of coal dust, filled with tiny sparkling fires is thrown against the heavens, as night descends. Another day dies, lost to dark’s embrace. The poet’s hand stirs, lifts pen to page For in this night of burning, pregnant suns a call is heard. Whispers, faint, are shouting, “Pen the word.” And so, he writes and writes of me. Proust- |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Your words flow so elegantly from start to finish! enjoyed reading! ~Tier |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Same for me here, love it very much. Titia |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you have done it again, you do pen your words with beauty and grace....lovely my friend... Greeneyes~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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elizabeth anne Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 83 |
Oooh, such beautiful imagery...I like this one! Elizabeth Anne |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael: Very beautifully done and so original...as: A sack of coal dust, filled with tiny sparkling fires is thrown and: For in this night of burning, pregnant suns a call is heard. Whispers, faint, are shouting, “Pen the word.” Love the way you did this! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Your choice of words astounds me, and beautiful words they are too! What a lovely piece. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Michael, such a way with words! This is so lovely. "For in this night of burning, pregnant suns a call is heard. Whispers, faint, are shouting, “Pen the word.” And so, he writes and writes of me." Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This is true artistry in motion, left behind to teach us how to write... this is, pure Michael... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
outstanding Michael...love it very much Charisma |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
~~Auguste~~a very hypnotic poem. I loved it. For those who believed in me - |
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