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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-05-11 05:51 PM




Please
open your arms
allow me in
no strings attached
just be my friend

Whisper thoughts
that soothe & then
kiss me softly
like a friend

I care not where
this leads or ends
just stay & love me
as your friend...

~Tier{R.T.}
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© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-05-11 05:52 PM


Friends are good....so is this!
latin passion
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2 posted 2001-05-11 05:54 PM


I enjoyed how you weaved your poem - I hope your friend answers. LP ()() hugs ()()

For those who believed in me -
I send my love.

Tiersdin
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3 posted 2001-05-11 06:29 PM


I happen to agree Decaflame, especially since good friends are hard to find!  *smiles*

Thank you, L P, I'm glad that you liked! *hugs*

~Tier

Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-05-11 06:36 PM


Who can't be your friend after reading this beautifull poem.

  Titia


Tiersdin
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5 posted 2001-05-11 06:54 PM


Aww.. Titia, so nice of you to say!

*smiles*

~Tier


snowpants
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6 posted 2001-05-11 11:41 PM


Hey, Tier...sometimes that's just what we need...the comfort and peace of a trusted friend...great write, m'friend!!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

JLR
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7 posted 2001-05-12 12:29 PM


Had to smile at this...can't tell you why.  Loved it!
samantha4
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8 posted 2001-05-12 01:01 AM


Oh Tiersdin!  It seems like every poem of yours that I've read has spoken directly to something going on in my life...
your words are beautiful, and the emotion behind them is touching.  Thank you for sharing...

i thank you God for most this amazing day;for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky - ee cummings

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9 posted 2001-05-12 03:24 AM


Tiersdin~ this just goes right to the heart. I need this in my library!  
Tiersdin
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10 posted 2001-05-12 12:34 PM



Thank you, Snowpants, I appreciate the sentiments! *hugs*


JLR, are you sure you don't want to share your little secret? hmmm? *wink*
Still, it's nice to know that the poem made you smile!

Aww...Samantha! *hugs* Now that makes my day!

Thank you, SEA, that kinda gets a girl right here! (taps heart)

*smiles*
~Tier




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