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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-05-11 12:59 PM

Cookie, Crumbling

in caramelized kisses
the earnestness
of his thought reached
her depths

folded in

she held on tenderly
to the
gingerness of his
touch, still untouched,

a dollop, waiting,

and slowly spread out
beneath the
intensity of the
fire’s bake

…a cookie…

warm and ready
to be served
with milk

Happiness in intelligent people is the rarest thing I know. E. Hemingway

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-05-11 01:07 PM

Decaflame, now this can be taken many different ways and I like all of them. A good cooking lesson. Nicely done. ME

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-05-11 01:09 PM

mmmmmmmmmmmmmm. . .

. . . so, this is the way that the cookie crumbles. . .

excellent. . .

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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-05-11 01:10 PM

o totally awesome o yuh

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2001-05-11 01:46 PM

Sounds so yummy! Scrumptious!

~Tier

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-05-11 01:50 PM

sensual anticipation of cookie devouring

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-05-11 01:51 PM

Pretty hot stuff metaphorically speaking that is! Nice job!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

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Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

7 posted 2001-05-11 01:56 PM

Excellent, excellent, excellent!!! Now I'm heading for the fridge to curb this munchie attack! (This too, could be a metaphor.*G*)

Good job.

Mike

[This message has been edited by Packratmike (edited 05-11-2001).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2001-05-11 05:34 PM

hmmm...now that was a tantalizing poem...I don't think I welcomed you to passions *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2001-05-11 05:40 PM

Works for me.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-05-12 04:11 AM

yes....works for me too

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

11 posted 2001-05-12 04:25 AM

And for me too

Titia

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