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The Dance
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The Dance |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
You tell me you only want to dance Nothing more nothing less But what does this mean So we just dance As time goes on You dance closer to me We come to that point When the dance becomes more Do we continue this dance You told me you only wanted to dance Nothing more nothing less But we still dance We have become More than just a dance Should I stop this dance Or should I continue You told me never again Yet its happening again Just like before And still we dance Am I doing the right thing By continuing this dance Or am I just getting what I want Nothing more nothing less This may be confusing but that is exactly what these feelings are. She said never again but I see that we are headed that way. Maybe that is what she wants, maybe not. In the past she has told me to just let things happen. Does that apply to now? What confusion but I do know one thing. I am who I am and will always be me. Thanx for your time. The White Wolf If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real. [This message has been edited by White Wolf (edited 05-12-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
feelings are confusing sometimes, especially when your not sure about each other, but its always good to be yourself, nothing more nothing less. excellent penned Charisma |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Thank you. It has been a long time since I have been able to write anything. I will be writing more ofter now that I have been released from a great many thing. It isn't really true confusion. I know what I must do and I hope that the road I travel doesn't hurt anyone anymore. Thans again. The White Wolf If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh, sometimes we write out our confusion in our poetry and it comes out and then we are clearer in our feelings, I don't know if that makes sense or not but I think I feel what you are saying here. Kathleen Blake |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Never loose yourself in a dance nothing more nothing less because than you will stumble maybe it's time to change the music Good luck Titia |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
I find that when I write my confused feelings in words things seem more clear and I am able to look at it from a differant angle. God Bless, LITL, †Heather†Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
welcome back my friend. . . keep writing, it's the only way out. . . you'll find what you're looking for. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Poetry has always been a release and a way to look at things from a different angle for me. That is why I am happy that I can indeed write again. There for a while I feared I would never do it again. I am glad to be back and am a bit surprised to find that I was missed. Thank you all. The White Wolf If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
In the confusion of the dance, words will draw a straight line.... fully understood. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
If you are happy in this dance, then just let it be.....if not, well......just stay true to you.  I hope the best for you SEA |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
I am very happy with this dance. I actually had already desided to continue this dance before I wrote this. I wrote it to gain even more release and a better understanding of these feelings. If it isn't obvious, but it looks as if it is, this is about a friendship, my best friend, that went beyond a friendship at one time. We are still best friends but she says that she only wants to be friends and yet she/we keep getting closer and closer and thus my confusion at the time. She once said just let things happen and so I will just let this friendship go where it may. The White Wolf If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
here's hoping it goes towards love....I'm a sucker for this kind of love working out! SEA |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
As am I, SEA. As am I. If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real. |
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