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Open Poetry #13

What A Rush

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

0 posted 2001-05-11 12:20 PM

Another life, lost on 85
van flipped, crashed and burned.

Why go to the racetrack,
we live it everyday.

Going 85 on 85
living on the edge.

It wasn't me this time,
it's just a matter of when.

A quiet moment sitting in traffic,
wondering who it is?

Another day, another loop
ahhh... here we go again.

For those who believed in me -
I send my love.

[This message has been edited by latin passion (edited 05-11-2001).]

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2001-05-11 02:40 PM

Rushing through a warm southern spring day,
It’s best to go a different slower more relaxed way
Avoid the speed and trouble ahead
And perhaps take 29 instead.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-11 11:00 PM

~~Professor G~~Thanks for the add on... most graciously accept.
But the lights on 29, ahh...
but today it wouldn't have mattered.
(smile & hugs your way).

For those who believed in me -
I send my love.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

3 posted 2001-06-05 08:19 AM

good poem Latin

i can definately relate

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