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Her pandora's box
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Her pandora's box |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Feeling deflated... not knowing that she has all but sealed her fate. What more can she say? She makes her appeals, He has all but drove the last nail in. How she wanted to experience the tenderness and softness of what could be shared together. How she counted the days they were to finally be together... now to late. They can't can hold on, what she holds very dear to her. She makes her pleas... Please give trust one more chance. the box... It is so dark, so very dark. A life without you, not being able to talk, give you my passion that I've held so to give to you - now outreaching to open space. Don't let us go... With care I will give to you.. BANG!!! The last nail - no chance... to late - the final kudo has just been driven. He gave his all - for a fool she was, he wants nothing of her to remember her by. She pleads...mercy and forgiveness...to unanswered calls... What can I say..give us a chance |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
hi. been there. (a few times) it's no fun at all. but i still know how to smile.  one small point re: the title... what was last out of the box? hey, it says crazy!...tom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I would call this quite out the box...and? I encourage you gently, as I must wonder at the source of your inspiration? Now, if you'll pardon me? I do believe I hear "Suzie Q" on the radio, and I, being me, find it impossible to sit here without at least one DECENT pelvic thrust...YWEOOOOOWWWW!!!!!  |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You wrote a heartfelt piece. Sometimes we just have to take the hint and get on with our life. |
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WhiteOnyx New Member
since 2001-05-07
Posts 9New Zealand |
Great work! Thouroughly heartfelt and well conveyed. I love it! |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful writing latin passion~ you express yourself nicely... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
heartfelt words you've penned here straith from your heart. excellent piece. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
~~Long overdue thank you's~~~ PoemCrazy~~ I agree it was no fun, but I've learned to smile again and to enjoy life and love. ~~serenity~~ Hormones....at 49 - something I had to do. enjoyed your comments - always. ~~inot2B~~ so true, so true! getting rid of excess baggage and bodyweight does wonders for the soul. Thank you for your kind words-from another Texan. ~~WhiteOnyx~~Thank you, cleansing one soul does wonders. ~~Greeneyes~~~Lauren~~ peace dove, and so very poetic. Your poems are an inspiration and I agree with your signature. Thank you! ~~Charisma~~ Your kind words speak so true. Thank you for reading it. It has been said that women moods can change quite often and to frequently to suit their needs. We can change our hair color; go buy a new wardrobe; eat chocolate;or just plain give up. My poem was doing the rash of it all. To two special people - I owe my profound respect and heartfelt thank you's. You know who you are --- The "M" you know is very grateful. |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
my box is very dangerous so don't be unaware! you just might think it's kitty litter, but it's not! BEWARE! some may try to nail it shut, but they will not succeed -- all such attempts to keep it closed are futile tries, indeed! i've told you all a million times at least (or maybe ten) please be on gaurd, pandora's box holds evils, and my pen repeats these words so all will know there's some things which i swear, that people should stay clear of... like pandora's box! BEWARE! hehe thanks for the inspiration! good poem! enjoyed! meeeeeooooowwwtahere! and remember...... beware pandora's box... |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
~~Pandora~~ A charmer you are! You can add to my thread anytime. I throughly enjoy the addition. Such luck that you'd find my box (hehe). hugs your way :-} |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes I remember these times and experiences very well...as if it were just yesterday...and sometimes it seems like it is always just yesterday...in my case the pain drives me away and I reach a point where I will take no more...or is it I cannot take any more...so...James |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I have to agree, this is so very heartfelt, so very touching, and very, very well written. You have a lot of talent! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm all for changing my hair color, enjoyed. Kathleen Blake |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
~~Saunni~~Thank you stopping by. ~~Irish Rose~~ Dark Brown, - Do I dare guess yours? (lv ya) Always appreciate your comments. ~~Walker~~snuck under the wire uhh? First time I've seen you loss for words. Invisible you're not. Please come back and drop note. ()hugs() coming your way. ~~LP~~ For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
sorry for taking so long to get to reading this one,it is so well written and i enjoyed the read very much |
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