the daughter i craved to see (not poem just my thoughts of her )

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Open Poetry #13

the daughter i craved to see (not poem just my thoughts of her )

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-05-11 11:27 AM

I finally seen my creation
it was such unexplainable sensation
but the contemplation of her beauty
just caused me to forget my worries
as i looked at such small cutie

her eyes just shine with love
as bright and purer than tha sun in the sky
it blinds my anger
wich opens up the tenderness in me

when i held her at first she smiled
it made all my locked up feelings go wild
makes the tougher thugs
feel as a child
i thank the lord for this surprice
i didnt do nothing to deserve it
but still I know she is all mine

cant wait to see her walk
or hear her call me daddy
what ever harm shell have to face
i'll be her shield in all the ways
what ever sadness she'll go through
she wont be alone
we'll crye together

she'll never be alone
as i was at my childhood
Angel Ailin u count up on me for ever
my bestes daughter
and no one will ever change that

LOVE IS HARD TO FIND ....BUT WHEN U DO ITS HARD TO DEFINE JUAN PABLO

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-11 11:28 AM

Somehow, it seems like a poem...

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

2 posted 2001-05-11 01:15 PM

juan, what lovely words! I have one son and 4 daughters, and I can tell you the girls are so very special. Now my son is a different matter...... The love for a child is hard to describe, but you have done well. Thanks for sharing, ME

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-05-11 08:29 PM

Aren't you surprised at how much your outlook changes when you hold your own sweet child? Good luck to you and to her. Joyce

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

4 posted 2001-05-11 10:32 PM

Beautiful token to your daughter. Already she has you wrapped around her finger. Such a loving bond you will have... LP

For those who believed in me -
I send my love.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-05-13 03:28 PM

Nice to have someone to love...James

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