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Let me spray venom
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Let me spray venom |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Anger is my friend for the moment eating insult is like chewing my ears off and I am not cannibalistic nor am I Mr. Mike Tyson! So I can't take it anymore, just let me fume for a while and fight my demons with a swift sword of venom. Rage is my being in myself needing a proper venting in a razor-sharp direction, else I might become a source of wasted energies, losing my point of view, caught in a blistering tornado heading into a reckless wreck! I don't believe in breaking things and I am miles away from breaking any relationships, for it takes more energy to mend and rebuild than to rip apart but I don't want to break my spirit either no, I am not the ballistic kind, so let me lose my rage in silent waves. In time the waves will reach the sea and by then my anger would be free. For now, let me be simply angry and don't even ask why I am so! !!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Great poem, Sudhir. Anger is such an all consuming thing, robbing us of all positive energies. Hope you are feeling better about things now! Corinne |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Sorry to see that you are in this mode, a most destructive thing, anger. I hope it resides and after some time, you are back to your sweeter side. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
The positive side is that your anger inspired a marvelous, descriptive poem. "Let me spray venom"....what a great title. Mike |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
As a fellow fighter of demons I can testify that you cannot use their own weapons, they must be fought with love.....take care Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 05-11-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so let me lose my rage in silent waves. I try that but occasionally they build up and I do think it is unhealthy to hold it all in...writing is a good outlet isn't it... huggz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sudhir let that anger serve it's purpose..and I won't ask...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Friends, I just tried to feel rage and write about it. I am fine. But I realised that it was difficult to imagine anger and write. Thanks for coming by. Corinne, that's an excellent summary. Thank you Decaflame, thank you a lot Mike, I am glad that you liked the title. Thanks a lot. Kathleen, thank you very much. Wynter, writing is indeed a excellent form of expression of the deepest feelings, be it anger, pain, frustration, love, or happiness. Thank you for reading James, Thanks, my friend Regards to all, Sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Applauding you Sudi! This is fabulous and so very well said! Maree |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Wonderful write, enjoyed the read. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Everything has a purpose, Sir Sudhir, even rage...it can be a cleansing experience. One loud shout of rage can bring peace to a troubled mind...you should hear me on the golf course!  Excellent writing, good sir.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oooh. Yeah.  Lucky for me, I can blame it on hormones? Smile with me here, but this just translated into my three word litany for the night: "LEAVE ME ALONE!" sigh...trying to recover now...thank you my dear friend! Finally, somebody touched a GOOD NERVE...LOL..made me smile, actually. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
So you were only imagining this anger? A wonderful job. Joyce |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Maree, I bow to accept your sweet words of praise. Thank you Seymour, my friend, thank you for coming by. I am glad that you enjoyed. Sir Balladeer, Thank you so much. Your words of appreciation are extremely well received, they mean a lot. O Serene one, anything to find a smile on your face, my friend. Thank you for passing by Joyce, thank you very much. My regards to all, Sudhir |
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