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Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-05-10 11:02 PM


LET ME swim
warm depths
of your BROWN EYES
'til  AMBER lights
SPARKLE dance
like bubbly
champagne
within my soul
LET ME
dive deep
for the love
waiting
for me
in abundance
LET ME drown
in your essence
until the universe
is no more
let me,
LOVE
YOU


~Tier{R.T.}




© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
latin passion
Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576

1 posted 2001-05-10 11:09 PM


From beginning to end I loved it. Such a loving tribute.
"Let me drown
in your essence
until the universe
is no more.
Let me
Love
You"

For those who believed in me -
I send my love.

Cuddlez
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
2 posted 2001-05-10 11:14 PM


pretty. says so much with so little!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

JLR
Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-05-10 11:47 PM


let me
Love
You

Seems so little to ask...yet what a chance we take in asking it!

mistyrose
Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety
4 posted 2001-05-11 12:58 PM


..until the universe is
no more.....

who could resist
a love such as this?

what power lies within
your loving words, tiersdin

i loved it!

mistyrose~

Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
5 posted 2001-05-11 09:28 AM



Thank you, Latin Passion, it was written long ago for someone special. *smiles*

Thank you, Cuddlez! *smiles*

JLR, you are correct, but one never knows unless they try! *wink*

MistyRose! *hugs* Thank you so much!

~Tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-11-2001).]

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