Open Poetry #13 |
Let Me |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
LET ME swim warm depths of your BROWN EYES 'til AMBER lights SPARKLE dance like bubbly champagne within my soul LET ME dive deep for the love waiting for me in abundance LET ME drown in your essence until the universe is no more let me, LOVE YOU ~Tier{R.T.} |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
From beginning to end I loved it. Such a loving tribute. "Let me drown in your essence until the universe is no more. Let me Love You" For those who believed in me - |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
pretty. says so much with so little! Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
let me Love You Seems so little to ask...yet what a chance we take in asking it! |
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mistyrose Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75state of anxiety |
..until the universe is no more..... who could resist a love such as this? what power lies within your loving words, tiersdin i loved it! mistyrose~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Latin Passion, it was written long ago for someone special. *smiles* Thank you, Cuddlez! *smiles* JLR, you are correct, but one never knows unless they try! *wink* MistyRose! *hugs* Thank you so much! ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-11-2001).] |
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