Open Poetry #13 |
Alone in this room |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Picture me here, alone in this room. Thinking of you. Tears in my eyes. Hope on my mind. Tasting your kisses. Projecting my sorrows, straight to your heart. I only know, what this feels like, to have love you so much, and to let you go. And in my solitude, I can still feel your touch. In the cold of the night, I can still breathe your warmth. I remain still, feeling your presence next to me. [This message has been edited by walker (edited 05-10-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walker~ 'And in my solitude, I can still feel your touch.' And you've touched your tenderness here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I know these feelings well, Walker, you've written them beautifully... ~Tier |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sad and well done! Agree with Marge and Tiersdin fully. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
If I can add my thread as well - I enjoyed the reading.LP For those who believed in me - |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
walker---This is too sad. I don't know what else to say. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
breathing the warmth of someone...hmmm wonderful thoughts walker..wonderful poem of love ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You keep writing Walker, we're here to support you in your sad moments, as good friends will. Let it out, it eases your mind a bit. Love, Titia |
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