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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-05-10 03:33 PM


Finding Home

you
were but an
apparition

a desire
that encompassed
and pressed
upon my
heart

a song

a dream of
magnificent
portent

until

until I touched
your face

and felt
the warm

traced your lips

and felt your
keen upon
my breast

you had no
way
no thought
to materialize

but you stepped
from my vision
of whim

into my real
of the morn

and in our kiss,
our meet
our sweet collide

my soul found
home





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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-05-10 04:33 PM


This is so in tune with my thoughts today, wow, what can I say but I think it's absolutely amazing verse!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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2 posted 2001-05-11 09:24 AM


Thank you very much, Kathleen.
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3 posted 2001-05-12 07:26 AM


Lady In White,

a desire pressed
upon thy heart

Words that sing
beautifully this morn

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

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4 posted 2001-05-12 07:48 AM


Thank you so much, Lady Ollyne, for taking a moment to read this.
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