Passions Gallery: Paula Finn (sun dawns)

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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-05-10 09:14 PM

quietly sun dawns
and again, her heart rises
to sing a new song

softly at the first
unsure of what the words are
the rhythm so new

but when sun is full
the waves of song fill the air
her heart lives again

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

1 posted 2001-05-10 09:23 PM

Soft, lovely, and very Paula... beautiful, Sven!

~Tier

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-05-11 05:28 PM

Yes Sven her heart does live again.
Full of fresh hope and inspiration.
Life can be sweet...James

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-05-11 06:06 PM

but when sun is full
the waves of song fill the air
her heart lives again
After going back and rereading Paula's writings I feel these words do represent the lady. You have once again done a superb job.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2001-05-11 09:15 PM

And I love the waves of song she sings,
Again you have catured the heart of the poet
Well done, Sven
Such a lovely portrait, Paula
Liz

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

5 posted 2001-05-11 10:49 PM

This fits Paula perfect. A job well done.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-12 02:50 AM

nicely written ,beautiful discription...
i liked it as always..sven...

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2001-05-12 08:09 AM

oh Sven this is beautiful...love the soft touch of your words.

Charisma

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-05-12 08:10 AM

You mean Paula hasn't seen this wonderful gift yet? Paula, where ARE you?

Marvelous, Sven...she will love it...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-05-12 10:53 AM

Thank you all my friends. . . I'm very glad that you all have liked this one. . .and I'm also glad that some of you have gone back to read Paula's work. . . that's another one of the functions of the Gallery to let you know about poets that you might not have had the chance to read. . .

And I'm sure that Paula will see this very soon. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

10 posted 2001-05-12 08:53 PM

Yea Paula!!! Yea Sven!!! I'm really not a cheerleader...I swear. You have indeed captured her here...but you'll never hold her. She has butterflies, you know?

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

11 posted 2001-05-13 10:27 PM

I do not know what to say...you honour me sir with a beauty I never expected...to say thank you just doesnt convey all this heart is feeling right now...

And to all of you...Tiersdin, James, inot2B,
Lady Liz, Alan, anonymous albert, Charisma, JLR and Sunshine...you are all so very sweet,what wonderful friends

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

12 posted 2001-05-14 12:45 PM

oh, this is beautiful! Paula must feel very special. Loved this!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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