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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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0 posted 2001-05-10 03:13 AM



Generations

We’re the sixties generation
We are sons of Viet Nam
Daughters of a revolution
Students of the killing bomb

All we wanted were some changes
All we asked for was some peace
Minds to open, hearts to care
And unrelenting war to cease

Dreams were made of daisy flowers
Idealistic notions reigned
Priciples were learned from parents
Whose Depression was engrained

Little did we know of hardship
Never had we lived in hell
Social justice was our call
Til one by one our heroes fell

Something must have moved a concience
Someone must have said it right
Changes came, but ever slowly
In our generation’s fight

How do we explain our times
To sons and daughters of today
Who can’t see an iron curtain
Shutting out the light of day

Minds live on computer chips
And satellites blaze through the sky
Nothing lies behind the fear
Or in a paper tiger’s eye

As for us, we still recall
Four little girls who lost their lives
We see strange names etched on a wall
And hug the one who still survives

Now the world is all connected
To the links of cyberspace
Our sons will never understand
The why and how of what took place

So much knowledge stands before them
Peace is something one expects
I cannot explain things to
The ones called Generation X

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 05-10-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2001-05-10 04:32 AM


I am moved by your words... my friend, Liz

How well you write...

Regards,
sudhir

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-05-10 06:12 AM


"Priciples were learned from parents
Whose Depression was engrained"

"Our sons will never understand
The why and how of what took place"

"So much knowledge stands before them
Peace is something one expects
I cannot explain things to
The ones called Generation X"

Excellent writing Liz! My goodness, you have so many incredible lines in this thought-provoking piece. One only seems to appreciate that which they survived through their own experience and generations' conscience. You've expressed these sentiments beautifully in this powerful piece my friend ... a wonderful read indeed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
3 posted 2001-05-10 06:36 AM


Lots to think about in this piece, written with power and conviction, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
4 posted 2001-05-10 07:07 AM


Another blue-ribbon piece of great writting. A lot to think about here. Thanks for sharing.
Melton

Nan
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5 posted 2001-05-10 07:12 AM


Perhaps we can take solace in the fact that the "Sixties Generation"... or the "hippies"... whatever the dub may be... is the most significant decade of the last century.  We hear nothing of the earlier decades standing and redefining society... We don't hear of the "Seventies Generation" or the "Eighties Generation".. or the "Nineties"....

We do stand as a monument to the world, don't we?.... Nice job, my friend... (Hope you had a wonderful time on your trip)...

suthern
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6 posted 2001-05-10 11:05 AM


The children of today may never understand... but I kept seeing headlines... So many feelings were resurrected by your poem and that's good... for though we can't explain, we should never forget. *S* Great poem, Elizabeth!
Sunshine
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7 posted 2001-05-10 11:09 AM


But Lady Santos...because of you, a spark may fire, and they may read this, and more, and come to the realization that while they might not understand what it is we've done...

at least they will know, we tried....

Excellent!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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8 posted 2001-05-10 12:01 PM


very moving, Liz, very true also.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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