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Woman, At Dawn
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Woman, At Dawn |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Woman, At Dawn The sounds and colors of morning stir the air around her Lying quite still in her slumber, there is a sweet tenderness about her. An almost silent sigh seems to release itself with every breath. Having been warmed during the night by dreams of passion, her nakedness is exposed to daybreak’s light. Poised on her side, a slight show of breast and thigh, tingle in the coolness of a new day. Her legs, shapely and long, entice the sun’s rising, hoping to peek into her window before she wakes… Annie Lehberg achildsheart 05-09-01 May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Critique? well, i only got nice things so say *grin* says so much with so little lines. awesome!!! love the image you evoke, by being subtly erotic... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
I perceive this woman to be of soft voice and streaming desire, a picture of sensuous thought, yet tempered by the sweetest of spirits. Charming view of a soul, at dawn. Coal |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Cuddlez, thank you so much, I am thrilled you enjoyed it. Coal, Your poetic response isn't taken lightly. I appreciate the support. thanks..  May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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