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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-05-09 11:20 PM



Woman, At Dawn

The sounds and colors of morning stir the air around her
Lying quite still in her slumber, there is a sweet tenderness
about her.  An almost silent sigh seems to release itself with every breath.

Having been warmed during the night by dreams of passion,
her nakedness is exposed to daybreak’s light.

Poised on her side, a slight show of breast and thigh, tingle in the coolness of a new day.
Her legs, shapely and long, entice the sun’s rising,
hoping to peek into her window before she wakes…

Annie Lehberg
achildsheart
05-09-01

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
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1 posted 2001-05-10 01:06 AM


Critique? well, i only got nice things so say *grin*
says so much with so little lines. awesome!!!
love the image you evoke, by being subtly erotic...

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Coal Surrender
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since 2001-04-01
Posts 84
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2 posted 2001-05-10 07:35 AM


  
  I perceive this woman to be of soft voice and streaming desire, a picture of sensuous thought, yet tempered by the sweetest of spirits. Charming view of a soul, at dawn.

Coal

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
3 posted 2001-05-10 12:15 PM


Cuddlez,
thank you so much, I am thrilled you enjoyed it.

Coal,
Your poetic response isn't taken lightly. I
appreciate the support.
thanks..

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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