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the touch |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
Your hair touches My arm I cannot breathe Your fleeting touch Is enough The morning thrush heralds the day; Oblivious. Like you. |
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samantha4 Junior Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
i enjoyed it very much....oblivion too often murders love before it even has the chance to begin.... i thank you God for most this amazing day;for the leaping greenly spirits of trees and a blue true dream of sky - ee cummings |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
To love unrequited, I am no stranger. You've written volumes in a few short lines. Enjoyed very much! ~Tier |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellent work... Regards, Sudhir |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Modes teachings forge close bonds,Interesting Poem Helen. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
enjoyed. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Your poetry touches my heart...I LOVE U I love to nice poetry. |
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