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Open Poetry #13

Poetic dreaming

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2001-05-09 07:11 PM

You captivate me
moving me
from mortal plane
to something more
divine

If I could dare touch you
would the fantasy end
or merely
a climax to our little
starlit rendezvous

A thousands words
have I penned
with you in mind
and still have more still
waiting to be born

On this spring eve
pausing from writing
to see a falling star
and as it touches earth
I swear I feel your
gentle kiss

Oh my beautiful dream
may you never
leave my soul
Even so
my pen will always remember.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-09 08:30 PM

This is classic romantic poetry, wow, I'm impressed.....

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-05-09 08:52 PM

Yes, this is good poetry. Hang on to that pen. Joyce

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-05-09 08:57 PM

Serious swooning here.....sigh.....

love this

SEA

If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-05-09 08:59 PM

Brad,
You have outdone yourself here I think.
The pen has a fascinating and frustrating way of remember for us, does it not?

Well..Here's to forgetting, I say. Will never happen though. Soo..Beauty in words, Brad. You've done well here and made me think.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2001-05-10 12:36 PM

Thank you all!

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

6 posted 2001-05-10 12:48 PM

I like this Brad...fantastic writing!!

Nathan

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2001-05-10 12:54 PM

Love this romantic gem.
excellent work.

Charisma

PoeticaL
Member

since 2001-03-31

Posts 50

8 posted 2001-05-10 05:10 PM

awwwwwwwwww...you are so amazingly sweet. I will never meet another like you. I will never come close. I can only thank god I found you. I can only hope you never go.

"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

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