Open Poetry #13 |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
If if love is a crime we shall all be convicted for they shall find the evidence in the seams of our minds and the cracks of our hearts "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
awwwwwww wish I had written that ..and you are the master criminal ! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
See, that's exactly why I don't mess with it, don't write about it, never even think about it. The love police are always lurking...can't be too careful. Loved this but then you would already know that! |
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PortuguesePoet Junior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 34 |
GUILTY AS CHARGED....... Love Arlindo |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
doing my time. . . life. . . excellent helen. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Lock me up ... and throw away the key ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
anything but solitary, that would kill me for certain! Kathleen Blake |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh, this is very good. Joyce |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
A sentence I wish not to be serving at this time, but I suppose none of us have a choice. I enjoyed this. Very simply said. Very effectively said. [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
I wonder how man men would go to prison for love? |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Ah, very well written, 1 slick lady. So very very true.
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
oooh, you do last lines sooooo well! And I love "quickies" like this too . . . Krawdad |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
I would like to enter Not Guilty plea for reason of "Insanity" ......... Very nice 1slick_lady |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
And you said I was good at the short ones? WOW!!!!!!!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and convicted we shall be so much said in so few words I enjoyed very much. Maree |
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