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Open Poetry #13

The Red Rose(repost)

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2001-05-09 02:29 PM

I guess y'll can thank Sven, for encouraging me to post another poem so quickly....I hope y'll like the poem though!

It stood in the middle
of a mystic garden.
Its' green stems spoke riddles
as its' brown thorns hardened.

The red rose presence called,
in the beauty of it's place.
Its' petals formed a wall,
as the sun shined with grace.

In it's own little heart,
is where the red rose rests.
In the moment of art,
sits the tender red crest.

The red rose stood very calm,
as the wind blew astray.
In the heart of my palm,
is where the red rose lay.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-09 03:20 PM

yes, it's lovely, wonderful lines here.thank you

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-05-09 03:29 PM

I loved reading these wonderful lines too.

Charisma

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2001-05-10 12:32 PM

Thank you Irish and Charisma for reading my poem!

Nathan

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

4 posted 2001-05-10 02:26 AM

lovely

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 2001-05-10 08:58 AM

Thank you Helen.

Nathan

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-05-10 04:26 PM

A red rose moment Nate...James

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2001-05-10 05:42 PM

nice

DYME
Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

8 posted 2001-05-22 03:29 PM

That was beautiful. I loved it.

NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

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