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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2001-05-09 12:45 PM

I wish I could have
you one more day
to stand face
to face, and say
that I love you
seeing the world
with in each dream,
Recalling times
I just held you
wrapped with in
your blue stare,
It wouldn't matter
how hard I tried
sometimes my eyes
can only cry
Echoes of You
You, my souls
base for hidden
canyons within my heart,
a calming, yet rippling
waters of the lake,
precious memories of
the golden star that sets
the eastern skies, and
the everlasting arrival
of my dawns
Your smile haunts
my dark hours,
your voice I hear in
the wind, knowing
my want is playing me
again
Your careless laughter
fills my air, a sweet symphony
like raindrops on my face
When I look to the skies,
my sigh can only breathe a
Thunder of each
passionate good-bye,
as it rings through night
air and becomes

Echoes of You

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-09-2001).]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-05-09 12:57 PM

*sigh*

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-05-09 01:06 PM

Oh dear Lord Lauren, this tugs me especially on this day.........gentle tears here. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2001-05-09 01:17 PM

Lauren,
this is done with all the grace and beauty that accompanies every piece that you write!
It's poignant in it's sense of loss, but strong in it's grasp of how love surrounds us throughout Nature herself. You are genius here, and I applaud you!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!

darabeth
Junior Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 33

4 posted 2001-05-09 01:38 PM

Beautiful!It sang softly to my heart.very good work!
DB

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

5 posted 2001-05-09 02:00 PM

Beautiful words of love.

Regards,
Olias.

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

6 posted 2001-05-09 02:06 PM

Very tender and touching, beautifully done.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-05-09 04:56 PM

I just held you
wrapped with in
your blue stare,
It wouldn't matter
how hard I tried
sometimes my eyes
can only cry
Echoes of You
You, my souls
base for hidden
canyons within my heart,
a calming, yet rippling
waters of the lake,
precious memories of
the golden star that sets
the eastern skies, and
the everlasting arrival
of my dawns
Your smile haunts
my dark hours,
your voice I hear in
the wind, knowing
my want is playing me
again
Your careless laughter
fills my air, a sweet symphony
like raindrops on my face
When I look to the skies,
my sigh can only breathe a
Thunder of each
passionate good-bye,
as it rings through night
air and becomes

Echoes of You
=====================

I cant pick JUST a few lines of this
I CANT!!......
I felt every word...every whisper and sigh of longing...
and now its engraved on my soul like a beautiful secret...
Your "stir of echos" spoke volumes of your heart and it touches ours
Thank you for that sweet poet