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Sweeetsuz
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 770
Fresno CA.

0 posted 2001-05-09 10:58 AM



There’s a new strange “magic” in the air!
It’s called the “Net”. It’s everywhere!
Start up the modem. Dial the “Net”
See if there's an e-mail yet!

Go to a room! Start a chat!
I wonder! Is this where he’s at?
Hello! is anyone out there?
Is there someone, for me to care?

Is he real, or just cyber space?
How can I know? I can’t see her face
Check my e-mail! Send ICQ again!
Will she be on? Oh where oh when?

How do I know, if he’s really there?
Is she really there? Does she care?
Is she married and just playing?
How can I believe, a word he’s saying?

Is this picture really true?
No word yet! God I’m blue!
What does he look like? How does he feel?
How can I know she’s really real?

My heart goes out over the “Net”!
Will she write? No e-mail yet!
When can I meet him? Who will he be?
What’s in her heart? Is she for me?

This cyber love, I cant’ decide!
Should I quit? No! Let it ride!
There’s a new strange “magic” in the air!
It’s cyber love! It’s everywhere!

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


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OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
1 posted 2001-05-09 11:02 AM


I love cyber poetry this is great, very well done, going straight in the library. Thanks for posting

Regards
Olias.

Sweeetsuz
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 770
Fresno CA.
2 posted 2001-05-09 11:06 AM


Again OLIAS, thanks for your time and consideration. I agree cyber poetry is so "Millennia" it seems appropriate  

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
3 posted 2001-05-11 11:24 PM


i like this poem  *hugs*  good job hun.  
love ya
jesse

ps.  dont be afraid to icq me sometime too     

And I cry to the alleyway
Confess all to the rain
But I lie straight to the mirror
The one I've broken to match my face

Sweeetsuz
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 770
Fresno CA.
4 posted 2001-05-12 12:18 PM


Thanks Jesse Hugs

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
5 posted 2001-05-12 04:05 AM


in answer to all those questions..
yes, he's out there,
yes  she's out there,
yes there are many lies told within the truths,
and hidden agendas...
so take each "cyber call or write" for what it's worth...
but beware..
for there are many "strange" things out there...
we are not all we portend to be...
but maybe who we wish to be...or our lives to be.

not to burst any bubbles...
just a gentle warning from one
who learned the hard way.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-12-2001).]

Sweeetsuz
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770
Fresno CA.
6 posted 2001-05-12 05:32 AM


many thanks for the "omens"!

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
7 posted 2001-05-12 09:41 AM


I agree with Wynter - there are many married men "pretending" to be what they are not.  I guess women too.  I enjoyed your poem and I will keep it in my library.  Regardless - you wrote a great one!
Sweeetsuz
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770
Fresno CA.
8 posted 2001-05-12 10:29 AM


Ariana the very anonymity of the net is it's allure. People pretend and act out fantasies with often destructive disregard for the feelings of others. There are also gender predators, stalkers, child stalkers and one must learn to protect themselves and their families out here as anywhere else danger resides...Yet it is also wonderous is this "Net" so many new friends and folks we've not met. The "Net" also brought us here to passions you know.
Thanks for the reading and comment Arianna

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


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