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SEA
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0 posted 2001-05-09 09:53 AM



He was just a dream
a wish, a fantasy
one night of passion
~but not reality

I knew I was dreaming
so I let go....gave in
but I swear I felt
his hands on my skin

Holding me close
soft music begins to play
with his hands on my hips
we began to sway

He circled around
and held me from behind
as he kissed my neck
he blew my mind

His hands traced my curves
while not missing a beat
igniting in me
uncontrolable heat

Circled back 'round
my lips he did find
and he kissed me.......he kissed me
till I thought I'd go blind

Mad with lust
consumed with desire
still he took me
dangerously higher

Over the peak
we blissfully fly..........
as morning comes
I quietly sigh


~SEA~

* the song that inspires sooooo much  
~Do Me Baby~
  Prince


Here we are
in this big 'ol empty room
staring each other down
you want me just as much as
I want you
let's stop foolin around
take me baby
kiss me all over
play with my love
bring out what's been in me
for far too long
that's all I keep dreaming of
do me baby
like you've never done before
ohhh give it to me
till I just can't take no more
come on and
do me baby
like you've never done before
ohhh I want you now
just can't wait no more
can't wait oh
I love you
oh

Here we are
looking for a reason
for you to lay me down
but a love like ours
is never out of season
so baby
please stop teasing me
ooh what you do
I could never love no other
you're the best I ever had
whenever we're
not close to one another
I just want you so bad
so
do, do me baby
like you've never done before
ohh give it to me
till I just can't take no more
come on and do me baby
like you've never done before
ooh I want you now
I just can't wait no more..........

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 05-09-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-05-09 10:04 AM


Now, if he is a fantasy, I vote that we all have at least a couple a day!!!  WOW!!!!
This is great, SEA......a double-header that certainly got my spirit moving this morning!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-05-09 11:11 AM


and he kissed me.......he kissed me
till I thought I'd go blind
===================

OH YEAH!!!
Love that line...
youre wound up early me girlie...
but then Prince does that to ya  
very cool(hottie) write...
niceyandspicy....
me thinks its Meatloaf nite   LOL
if ya burn it..it wont matter...
cant see it if ya are blind  

"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold." ...
"So dawn goes down to day,
Nothing gold can stay."
~Frost~

Sweeetsuz
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Fresno CA.
3 posted 2001-05-09 11:15 AM


You have such a gift

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 632
California, USA
4 posted 2001-05-09 11:30 AM


KISSING???!!!  Kissing makes you go blind???!!!  That's not what my Momma told me!*G*

Nice fantasy, SEA.

Mike

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
5 posted 2001-05-09 11:30 AM


Great write, very sensuous, dont start listening to Darling Nikki whatever you do or you next post will be in adult lol.
Thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

I met a girl named Nikki I guess you could...
No No No....dammit.

SEA
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6 posted 2001-05-09 11:45 AM


Sunnyone~ at least one a night    lol thanks

Janet~usually am oh yes, he does, thanks  

Sweeetsuz~ thank you, thats so nice of you to say!  

Mike~ depends on the kiss.....    thanks  

Olias~ heehee, I like that one too   and many many many more   thanks  


~SEA

Jamie
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7 posted 2001-05-10 08:47 PM


any steamier and it would have to be moved to adult...lol

Very nice SEA..

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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8 posted 2001-05-12 07:50 AM


*wow* Sea I love this fantasy.


((hugs))
Charisma

Taffetta
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9 posted 2001-05-12 10:04 AM


You can sure get a girl dreaming - WOW.  I vote with Sunny - 2 or 3 a day would be great!  Exceptional writing.
Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville
10 posted 2001-05-12 12:08 PM


nothing at all wrong with fantasy, it keeps us grounded to this place.......
Michael

Parker
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11 posted 2001-05-13 12:45 PM


I agree fantasy is good for the soul.....
I fantasize about that smile all the time.  

Parker

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12 posted 2001-05-13 01:20 AM


Fantastic SEA......I love to dream and feel the results, even if it's only a dream....~sigh~  


Lauren~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


dgvarner
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Posts 3552
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13 posted 2001-05-14 03:14 PM


oh yeah!!  i've definately been dangerously involved in such a dream of my own..!!  dreams are good...

love this one sea!  (and prince is good for a dream grind too, aye!!   )

hugs, g

"...if i ran away,
i'd never have the strength
to go very far..."  

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