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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-05-09 09:52 AM

single golden beam
ascending to setting rays
lights bright sight's delight

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-09 09:57 AM

I love watching the sun rise each morning....this is beautiful Sunshine

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2001-05-09 10:00 AM

Good morning, Sunshine!
As I'm reading this, the sun is starting to peek through the newly budding branches on the tree outside my window! What a nice way to start my day, with Sunshine and sun!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2001-05-09 10:06 AM

wonderful work, Karilea,

regards
sudhir

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-05-09 10:13 AM

Ahhh, an ode to sunshine...yet almost an ode to Sunshine and the beautiful rays of her poetry.

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

5 posted 2001-05-09 11:57 AM

Its raining here as usual, but I can imagine thanks to you.

Regards,
Olias.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-05-09 01:03 PM

ahhhhhhhhh. . . I feel better now. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2001-05-09 02:43 PM

yessssssssssss.....loved it very much Karilea....

((hugs))
Charisma

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

8 posted 2001-05-10 08:54 AM

This brings forth to me visions of the sunrise even though you mention "setting", anyway I like, well done!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown

[This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 05-10-2001).]

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-05-10 10:29 AM

beautiful

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-05-10 02:38 PM

Just one golden beam?
Nay. The rays come, abounding.
Seeming teeming beams.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

11 posted 2001-05-10 03:13 PM

I especially like the last line!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

12 posted 2001-05-10 03:49 PM

As golden as the author! This has such a wonderful image to it!

Corinne

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

13 posted 2001-05-12 06:09 PM

such a peaceful and serene read. thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

14 posted 2001-05-12 06:21 PM

Karilea~~thanks for sending some rays my way. As much as love the four seasons... I am a sun person. Keep it coming! LP

For those who believed in me -May God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

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