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Little Promise
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Little Promise |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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A little promise just a simple little promise, it meant so much to me when you made it.... Made me feel so much better made me feel like it was important. It was the only thing I asked of you, the only thing that meant so very much to me. I guess it didn't mean as much to you as it did to me... I guess I failed to make you see... And it was just a little promise... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
not sure about this one..it seems sad to me..but I guess it depends on what that promise was..huggzzzzz D ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Who looks through this glass dimly shall find some promeses kept and some left behind. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, it hurts when the one we love doesn't realize just how important some little things are to us...great write, GS! sp  to be with you... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Little things are big when it comes to love. Beautiful poem! |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
HUGS Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Trust is such an important thing and once a promise is broken it's hard to trust again. I wish you my best and hope this is only a story. Michael Proust- |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I understand. I have met some who make promises quickly, carelessly and forgetfully. They just don't get it. Joyce |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You have all touched my heart with your words. I wish.....oh how I wish that it only were a story, and that things will work for the best. Michael, you are correct, once a promise is made, then broken, the trust takes time to build again. Thank you.....all. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
This is too much... talk about a mirror effect. e-mail coming. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol.....I just received it, thank you so much for that. *s* Love always travels a path, it comes to many, and it leaves. It is what we take from that love that counts. Hugs. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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