Open Poetry #13 |
Knowing |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Happiness pours out my cheeks As to you I fondly speak Blushing as the words you say Bring joy to my day Smile worn across my face As at you I gaze Tingling as back you stare Catching me unaware Stuttering words I squeak As to you I try Speak Blood flowing through my body fast Seconds, Minutes fly right past Heart pounding inside my chest As with you I am at rest Thoughts flow through my mind As new things of you I find Eyes swell full of tears As my soul it holds you near Tears run from my eyes I never want to say goodbye |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Julie, This is so well written.. so much feeling in the knowing... regards, sudhir |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Goodness! This was marvelous writing. Wiping a tear. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is how it should be Julie. . . may we always know this. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
It's been a long time, but I remember. Joyce |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
sounds like love to me, all the signs are there... |
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