Open Poetry #13 |
When Your Shadow's Dancing |
JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
When Your Shadow's Dancing Reality nearly suspended old stories to tell new friends quiet notes only the poet and I understand I love it when your shadow dances as I rest beneath the sun flashing by will of your movement through my closed eyes keeping rhythm with your breath Our connection escapes me telling myself not to question why I am caught up in your highs too deeply tuned in to your lows When your shadows dancing I’ve no questions at all [This message has been edited by JLR (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
jlr.....good....then none needed......helen "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 05-09-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ Very nice ... 'old stories to tell new friends' Now ... I REALLY like that thought ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*dreamy sigh* lovely writing! ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
then fire up the music RJ!! loved this one. . . I like when we don't need the words. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ohhh....several months ago many of us participated in a "Shadows Dancing" theme... this brings back many lovely memories, while standing alone in its own glory! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
JLR- This is getting weird, now I'm identifying too painfully with your poems. Thanks for sharing! |
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