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Open Poetry #13

No Mistake

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-08 03:00 PM

No Mistake

flow through your day
have no bumps to ride
you shall be liquid
in movement you glide
let your sorrows
be in past
I pray for you
they melt fast
purposed words
that you say
will again come soon
there they’ll stay
in a shadow
by your side
gives back the peace
you provide
soothing music
that you make
your notes ring true
it’s no mistake

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-08 03:12 PM

yes, Helen, the day - we should glide through it, we are women, we are in control

(I hope)

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-05-08 08:28 PM

there is no mistake helen... this poem flowed wonderfully. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-05-09 12:18 PM

I read this right before leaving for work...proceeded to flow through the evening. Some poems, poets just have a calming effect on me.

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