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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-05-08 11:59 AM

Last night I fell alone
to the stars that came
and sang above me.

The pause came to me
to triumph my sense
of dignitary.

The wind is my love
that fails to give in
dancing on currents
you cannot see the end.
If you wait for a breath
if you wonder for that time
you can see her flowing
from the stars in my eyes

Any day, will I course myself
to change the way
I want to laugh again.

The night that brings
it fears collide with
what I carry.

In the wind is my love
that strengthens my resolve
to wipe off my knees
from the last of my tears.
If you wait on last breath
you feel her soft touch
as she kisses you passing
as the days end in hearts.

[This message has been edited by Michael G (edited 05-08-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-08 12:08 PM

stunning......

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-05-08 09:15 PM

This is absolutely breathtaking poetry, please write more....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2001-05-08 09:20 PM

You and your wind! LOL I can count the amount of times that you don't have a breeze or wind in your poetry somewhere.

This paints an interesting picture. As always your imagery is impectable and next to none.

Love
Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-05-09 05:06 PM

Last night I fell alone
to the stars that came
and sang above me.
========================
The wind is my love
that fails to give in
dancing on currents
you cannot see the end.
If you wait for a breath
if you wonder for that time
you can see her flowing
from the stars in my eyes
==================================
In the wind is my love
that strengthens my resolve
to wipe off my knees
from the last of my tears.
If you wait on last breath
you feel her soft touch
as she kisses you passing
as the days end in hearts.
======================

sweet, gentle poet of the wind

your words are the wind beneath your wings...
this is beautiful Michael.

"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold." ...
"So dawn goes down to day,
Nothing gold can stay."
~Frost~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2001-05-10 04:32 PM

amazing write of your painted canvas......

Greeneyes~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

6 posted 2001-05-11 10:46 AM

Beautiful.........as always.
Jenn E

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2001-05-11 10:57 AM

I especially like the 1st stanza.

I am curious, "dignitary"?

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

8 posted 2001-05-11 11:25 AM

flows like a song, very enjoyable!

Corinne

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

9 posted 2001-05-11 11:26 AM

I agree with Corinne, this sings a most lovely song...

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